Apart

I chase you till dusk

Sun fades to dust

Star light crumbles

Under the moon cut crescent

The hole inside smiles blindly

Stare into the sun and not find me

Venomous vein shed the skin

Left behind but just within

Close my eyes to hide my soul

I’m as blind with the same hole

The smiles on our faces turn to grimaces

Two of the same but in different places

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BoardFlak says:

August 20, 2019 at 2:20 pm

I like this. On the whole, I’d rather be a part than apart.

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1. The Sad Owl says:
  
  August 20, 2019 at 2:27 pm
  
  I enjoyed every part of that whole sentence!
  
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BrittnyLee says:

August 26, 2019 at 8:31 pm

I love the whole thing but am absolutely in love with the first and second lines. They immediately drew me in . Beautiful work.

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1. The Sad Owl says:
  
  August 27, 2019 at 12:13 pm
  
  Thank you again 🙂
  
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  1. BrittnyLee says:
    
    August 27, 2019 at 6:47 pm
    
    Welcome 🙂
    
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